This student has been working very hard on perfecting her essay writing skills. This last week she wrote essays on many different topics, including an essay about whether she thinks smartphones are positive or negative. She did a great job with the first draft of her essay. For homework, she was instructed to revise and edit her essay and add more details.
She has specifically been working on creating a strong closing paragraph. The teacher explained that a strong closing paragraph is very important because it’s the last thing that the reader reads. She revised her essay, adding more details and organization, and her essay really improved!
Correcting our own work and revising is an important step to becoming a good writer, and this student has definitely made a lot of progress using this process! Great work this week!